Landscape Hills by Money$eal
A tree, a tree...where should I put one? It looks a lot better. I have improved since my first drawing on Colors! 3d. Almost all of the credit goes to JoshHook. Yet I could still use some constructive critisism. What could I improve upon? #landscape #hills #cloud #practice
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31 May, 2013, 4:15 am
Something is missing. (Read disc.) How big of a tree where should I put it?
31 May, 2013, 4:48 am
This grass is perfect! i love it!
31 May, 2013, 4:59 am
Really?! Thank you.
31 May, 2013, 7:27 am
Very nice! Details are wonderful! I really like this.
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31 May, 2013, 9:38 pm
OMG THANK YOU FOR FOLLOWING ME QwQ
This work is pretty good and yet you ask for tips, and such...
verywell,
the cloud could use more value in it... study the works of others or closer examine a cloud, se where you can add shading or gaps... The sky isn't neccecarily (idk how to spell it :P) an almost solid sky blue... wherever the sun os directly, it get slightly lighter the closer it gets to the general area, i suggest adding a light coating of blue and white, maybe another completly different color, experiment with colors and it may become what your after by accident... the grass is quite detailed, good job :3.
overall: you did great
31 May, 2013, 11:02 pm
the composition is great! The cloud should be wider down bottom, thinner up top. Picture a pyramid or look at the cloud on the right on my tut....that shape. and dont forget to "fluff it up on zero opacity"
31 May, 2013, 11:04 pm
The hill on the lefts' shadow from the cloud is fantastic! And remember, the Horizon is Always lighter than the top of the sky! EXCEPT AROUND THE SUN!!
31 May, 2013, 11:47 pm
Hey thanks guys the advice is very helpful! I will keep practicing.
01 Jun, 2013, 12:39 am
Woah, love the grass. :D Thanks for following me!
01 Jun, 2013, 3:43 am
I have hit a dead end...don't know what to do.
01 Jun, 2013, 3:45 am
I guess I am the depressed artist...
02 Jul, 2013, 10:17 pm
Why havent you drawn anything new since my tutorial? I HOPE i didnt waste my tyme trying to teach you technique....
14 Jul, 2013, 10:36 pm
I have been really busy this summer. I've been camping, in drivers ed class (passed my permit test btw), hanging out with friends, etc. Sorry!
14 Jul, 2013, 10:40 pm
I kind of want to do more art, but I do not have the time, pacience, and motivation at the moment.