Great poem... but she seems so upset, like she asked someone something she already knew, and they lied.... That feeling is probably one of the most painful... :(
wait u thought that u messed up? with the writing well it really gives off the right effect. 10/10 all the way! go forward in your work and shoot 4 the stars.
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22 May, 2013, 2:03 am
cool
22 May, 2013, 2:14 am
meaningful poetry, good job ^-^
22 May, 2013, 2:24 am
-glomp- I'll never hurt you Savi <3
22 May, 2013, 2:30 am
great poem :o
22 May, 2013, 2:46 am
Great poem... but she seems so upset, like she asked someone something she already knew, and they lied.... That feeling is probably one of the most painful... :(
22 May, 2013, 2:58 am
It always does... :(
22 May, 2013, 3:04 am
Thats good! :)
22 May, 2013, 3:20 am
Beautiful love it!!! XD
22 May, 2013, 4:50 am
I wish I could wrap my arms around that beautiful fur... <3 *day dreams of dogs*
23 May, 2013, 1:22 am
nice eyes, there exe
23 May, 2013, 10:48 pm
lol, thanks for the comment! I like your gallery too! im happy to see that you want to pursue a career in wild life! thats really neat! Do it! :) :)
28 May, 2013, 2:05 pm
Circle with line through it?
You unmeaningfully drew Phi. Be proud, it's called the golden ratio for a reason.
30 Aug, 2014, 10:53 pm
Makes me think of myself and my emotions
19 Sep, 2014, 12:11 am
wait u thought that u messed up? with the writing well it really gives off the right effect. 10/10 all the way! go forward in your work and shoot 4 the stars.