A warriors tail part 1 by Max McCloud

This story starts out with a not so happy beginning. (Nathan) Hm hu *wakes to the sound of fighting outside* Whats going on out there? *looks outside* Who what the shadow clan here. (Dad) Nathan get back in the den now. *he runs back inside to find his mom nere the back* (Nathan) Whats going why are they here? (Mom) I dont no but it cant be good hide here quickly. *hides behind a larg rock* (Shadow clan cat) Where is the kit we know your hiding him. (Mom) Sorry you will have to go throght me.

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
03 May, 2013, 7:28 pm
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Max McCloud

03 May, 2013, 9:12 pm

Story continued. *A fight starts but is soon over* (Mom) Not much of a fight. Come on lets go find your father. * Thay walk out to find him in the clearing* (Dad) Thank star clan your both safe. *A voice in the distance* What a touching reunion almost macks me sad to brake it up almost. (Dad) Scarface come out show your self. (Scarface) Im right here. (Dad) Both of you get out of here now. Be strong my sun. * They run a good distance before they find there path blocked by scarface* (Nathan) Where is he what did you do with my father? (Scarface) He was week so i got rid of him. (Mom) ILL make you pay for that. *A fearsome battel takes place* (Mom) Run go now i got this. * With tears in his eyes he runs as fare as his legs can take him* (Nathan) I..im all alone now. * He finds shelter under a old tree and crys him self to sleep that night. //part two coming soon//.

LuxCreator

03 May, 2013, 10:56 pm

Woah. Just woah.

LuxCreator

07 May, 2013, 12:10 pm

When are ya gonna do the next one?

Max McCloud

07 May, 2013, 10:43 pm

Im working on it right now.

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