nice! the pics are great and the words are clear! you don't see that very often XD

It's been way too long since I last checked your gallery. Once again, great art and I hope to see more.

(previous comment from dawn to tectonic) -she walks passed him and strokes her tail under his chin then focus's her energy on her front hooves creating a dragon claw shape*
Dawn: looks like ive got another ability to learn mastery of*winks at tectonic as she readies for her next lesson* im ready tectonic.

This is amaaaaaziiinnng! Your OC Dawn is one of the most unique I've seen. :D

I loled at dragon breath, epic fail. XD
awesome comic thingy.

Dawn: hey im trying my best, with help from tectonic shift, ill become a powerful dragon pony.

Tectonic: *He blushes wildly, covering his face with his hair*

Okay then. Well the Breath and Charge is nearly done. Lets work on your spells. Lets try levataion, one of the rirst spells that every unicorn learns. See that pebble over there? Try picturing the area around it in your minds, then uses imaginary hooves to pick it up. Your thoughts will be translated to magic, hopefully.

(I have school now so i'll be back in like 6-7 hours...)

Dawn: im not a unicorn, im a dragon pony, but i guess i can try levatating objects *she powers energy into her horn and dragon sparks buzz around it*

*as she concentrates on the levitating the rock by sending dragon energy bolting around it, She pokes his tail hair with her tail end.

*Tectonic shudders, his tail curls up to his side as he looks down to cover his face*

G-g-great wor-r-k Dawn...
*He had never been so close, it was kinda scary.. He decided however that he needed to stop being a wuss, so he returned with a cheeky wing flick to face praying that she'd sneeze*

Razor:Dont insult me, I'm sick of you. *Stabs and makes sure youre the real him* Real. *points head up and grabs him by the neck and spin-kicks his back and shoots him into a mountain then kicks him through 200 planets freezing his bones leaving you as a ghost* I'll give you your precious body. * *gives him the body of his soul*

(not trying to be mean razor but please take your rp comment somewhere else, this picture is fore rp relating towards Dawn. Thank you!)

*Dawn tries not to sneeze but cant help but it so as she sneezes she looks away so's not to hit tectonic*

Dawn: that was cheeky tectonic, *she then cloaks herself in the dragon energy and stand opposite him with an obstacle in the way, as she charges and breaks through it, she trips on a small fragment and accidentally lands on tectonic, making their noses touch, she blushes smiling and looks away*

Sorry Tectonic^W^

*Tectonic looks aside, the deepest blush on his face and a expression with "Ohmygodahasdfghjkl" on his face*

Tectonic: Its okay..

*He leans forward lifting Dawn up at the same time. He places her down and uses his wings to get onto his hooves*

Okay. Um uh... I don't know if we have anymore powers to work on right now.
*He looks around breifly and returns his gaze*
Do you want to go out somewhere and get some grub to eat. Maybe we can go to the mountains and pratice your skills in real terrain afterwards?

*He stutters around a bit, hoping he found the correct words*

Like just to hang around and have fun not like a date or anything...
*Dear lord what was he doing? Eventually he stopped speaking and hung his head in shame*

''Tectonic you idiot'' He muttered under his breath.

Dawn: *smiles and places a kiss upon tectonic's cheek* i would love to

*she places her wing on his back* where do you want to go?

-she smiles and walks beside him-

*Tectonics whole mood shifted from embarassed to the happiest colt in the world. He had butterflies in his stomach and he felt like he was king. He looked around a bit then saw Canterlot Peak*

Tectonic: Maybe up there? I head there's a great resturant in the clouds and getting to the clouds would be a challenge itself!

*He smiles and extends his wings*
Race you there!

-she opns her wings as ruby scales shiny in the light as she flies after him-

Dawn: *it was starting to show that tectonic was the one she wanted to be with and with a powerful push of her wings and catches up to him turns side ways and winks at him as she whooshes passed* hi...bye^^

-she cracks her tail like a whip and slingshots herself to the restaurant- cmon slow poke you don't wanna lose to a girl do you?

*He notices her fly by*

Tectonic: Hey no fair!

*He uses his magic to create a wall infront of Dawn as she is shooting towards the clouds*

Watch this!
*He begins to spin, getting faster and faster and faster. As he spins a fire burns around him. He pauses for a second and the fire spins out shooting him like a bullet at the clouds. He breaks the sound barrier and a warm yellow blaze circles around*

Woah...
*He turns around and lands surronded my awestruck pegasi. Meanwhile he completely forgot about Dawn so he rushes to the edge to see where she is*

Dawn: *taps on the window behind him, had already arrived* sorry but i used my dragon energy to break that wall

-she walks outside- you did put on quite the show*kisses his nose* now how bout we go in?

I love this drawing a whole lot, that I keep coming back.
I think its Dawn's adorableness, the fail dragon breath, popping 3D effect, and that there's a lot going on everywhere in this drawing. Also, Dawn, where did your snout/nose go in the first panel, vacation, or Trixie took it?

Tectonic: Yeah...
*He rubs his hoof at the back of his head*

Lets get a booth. 'Scuse me sir?

Tablepony: Yes sir? Would you and your lovely mare like a seat? Today isn't as busy so we have some good seats free. If you'd be able to pay that is.

*Tectonic examined the area. There where 3 booths free. One by a window overlooking Equestria, another closer to the door. And one in the middle. He turned to look at Dawn*

Which one do you think would be best?

Dawn: Hmm well i rather like a seat with a view so i'd vote for the one near the window.
*shes gets her pony bag out and uses her dragon energy to take her purse out* shall i pay tectonic?
-The table piny walks us over to the booth-

*Tectonic puts his hoof over her purse*

Tectonic: I'll pay today.

*He said giving her a soft peck*

Tablepony: It'd be 8 bits for the booth and a extra 3 for a ''All you can eat deal''

*Tectonic pulled out 12 bits from under his mane (Like a little pocket or something I dunno XD)
and gave the Tablepony them*

Keep the spare bit as a tip!

*He walked over and stepped back to give Dawn space to sit first, it was one of those booths with the table in the middle and a wall and platform lined with cusions, to provide more enclosure for the couples*

Tablepony: Thankyou sir. Your plates and cutlery will arive along with your A.Y.C.E. pass.

*The resterant had the All you can eat area sectioned of because too many ponies where taking food without paying*

(I have dinner now so I'll be back in like 30 mins to and hour ^^'')

Dawn: *she smiles upon being softly pecked by tectonic then sits in the booth awaiting the plates*

this is certainly a nice restaurant, im glad to have come here, my time with you has really opened me up and i really appreciate everything you've done for me.

i really cant see myself without you tectonic, *takes the gem she gave him* even more im gonna give you something ive never given anyone

*she focus's her energy on the gem as it starts to turn heart shaped, then in the middle she creates shapes the form the letter D and T with a heart in the middle* here you go i hope you like it *hands it to him*
-the tablepony arrives with their plates, cutlery and A.Y.C.E pass's*

Tectonic: Thanks.

*He takes the pass and then looks at Dawn*

Well then ladies first!

*He slides the pass over to her*

Dawn: *smiles as she takes the pass and with plate levatating with her power, she goes up to the all you can eat and sees her favourite food, Strawberries and white chocolate cookies, Puts some on her plate as she then takes a few muffins*

-upon finished putting her fave foods on her plate, she awaits tectonic-

*Tectonic returns with a plate of shortbread biscuits, applesnaps and poppyseed cake*

Tectonic: I see you like strawberries. I'm more of a Orange/apple pony but that doesn't matter...
*He sits opposite of Dawn and picks up a menu*

Drinks.... Ciders, Coffee, Juice, Wine, smoothies... What'd you like?

*He calls over a nearby Waiter*

Waiter: May I help you two?

Dawn: hmm such a wide selection of drinks, do you have CherryAde? with ice please *smiling as she enjoys her Cookies*
im a fan of different berries, cherries, strawberries especially with white choc

I already hav I just didn't comment

sorry D:

This is awesome!!

Dawn: thank you^^

Dat dragon breath LOL
Her mane looks pretty freakin' cool when she's trying to do dragon-y stuff!

Interesting O.C.

thanks shes got her eyes on a male mlp OC already.

Dawn: oh tectonic where could you be?

so cute X3

cute, i like the dragon charge :o

*The ground shifts as a boulder pulls up from the ground, it splits in two and Tectonic is standing inside* Sorry Dawn, had to go check on the core. *He rubs his head*

Dawn: ive missed you soo much tectonic *she tackles him smiling big time* i was gonna draw a picture of me n you flying together